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Sagas of torment rain from above
The dark cloud follows every step
No one sees within the shadows
Inside the storm of tears

At last the hope was growing
The pain so far and yet so near
Love inside was getting stronger
But still the heart fades away

Dark inside but bright outside
Despair swelling and heartache growing
Memories shatter beyond a whisper
Again the agony breaks through the madness

Those who were near are lost forever
Friends so dear fall farther still
Love stays strong but not for much longer
Fear is strong and getting stronger

Volcanoes erupting beyond the horizon
Time is lost while love is faded
Emptyness remains but that too fades
And left alone the soul rots beyond decay

But no more will this pain keep daunting
The love inside will not stop growing
Never will the struggle hold sway
Life is to dear to let pain fill the sky
©2004-2009 ~adaxe
:iconadaxe:

Author's Comments

I did this poem as a gift for a friend of mind. Yeah, I don't think it's very good, but people often tell me otherwise. Oh well, take a look! lol

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:iconkiyodel:
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! O.O That's amazingly deep!!!!!!! I love it! *smiles* .................... How on earth did you come up with that? I've done poetry and read alot of poetry *consider E.A. Poe is favorite poet*............................ yours is breath-taking. I not just being nice or anything as most people would think.... I'm completely serious. Did you ever submit any of your work on poetry.com?............
:iconadaxe:
Uh, I suck, plainly stated. lol. Nice sugery coating. lol. (Just kidding) No, I haven't, and I don't plan to. I don't plan on doing anything with my poetry other than keeping it here.
:iconsillie:
Heh... I think the other people are right. You're good at this... ^__^

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~*A dirty mind is a joy forever*~
:iconkiyodel:
well, If your willing to...... I have enough crazy ideas to go around....... *means putting your poetry for the world* ...... you see, I'm a dreamer and if I can make what I want come true...... I'd would love to have others join me........ so if my manga could ever become famous *hopes* I'd love to put your poetry with my stuff. Regardless of what happens though I do love Rain Cloud and I'm quite sure i'd love the rest of your work as well. *smiles* *loves new friend*
:icons4r4hkun:
Deep and beautiful. Awesome work man! Can't wait to read more. ^_^
:iconteutelquessir:
Beautiful poem and quite true.

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